For the first time...

That night, she was very very tired but when she lied down on bed, she just could not sleep..

All the scenes from the day flashed by her eyes...

One day.. And so many things in her life had changed...

She recollected a dialogue fro ma movie "Life mein bahut saari cheezein pehli baar hoti hai..."



For the first time... She had lied at home while going out...

For the first time... She got the biggest surprise when she knew that he had got a new bike...

For the first time... She sat on the bike with fear but was confident that he would take care of her..

For the first time... She roamed around places, where though she had been earlier, seemed entirely different and new that day...

For the first time... She felt like talking and talking as someone was listening to her with a smile..

For the first time... She walked barefoot on the rocks as the water kissed her feet...

For the first time... When she was about to lose her balance, someone was there to hold her hand...

For the first time... she dint realise how time flew by.....

For the first time... she knew why people in Love spent sleepless nights.....!!

For the first time... she had been on a "Date..!!"

P.S. : For the first time, tried my hand at writing something romantic.... :P

Actually I had found this pic sometime back and wanted to write something based on it..How is it..??? :)

Comments

Sh@s said…
Though a first timer, you succeeded in your attempt. Its sweet.
April 8, 2010 at 2:50 AM
Beyond said…
whenever I think about the first date the word nervousness comes to my mind.
Nice one.
April 8, 2010 at 6:18 AM
simply me said…
a really sweet and innocent post :)
April 8, 2010 at 7:28 AM
Gautam said…
Simple, sweet and captured the emotions very well! Kudos!! :)
April 8, 2010 at 7:29 AM
Mr. "Niraj" Lemon said…
a great attempt...strike the gold on the first time.
April 8, 2010 at 9:48 AM
Rahil said…
for the first time urvashi's corner is seemingly like romantic romantic :) :)

i cud relate most of the first times with me..nice nice..!! I like it :)

And i tooo love the blog's theme :)
April 8, 2010 at 9:58 AM
Harini said…
The pic is really great and you know the writing is very good too.
April 8, 2010 at 10:56 AM
Anonymous said…
Kya baat hai !! Urvashi's take on romantic posts ? Good yaar ..Its really romantic and adding on to it , your first time confession:P;):D
April 8, 2010 at 2:33 PM
Ordinary Gal said…
it was too good but I don;t think it's a fiction...rite na ? :P :D
April 8, 2010 at 3:16 PM
Unknown said…
lovely piece...
things can be told so simply..
Wow!!

Cheers

Nuts
April 8, 2010 at 4:32 PM
rohini said…
grt dear....too good....loved it a lot....
April 8, 2010 at 4:32 PM
rohini said…
PS - following u
April 8, 2010 at 4:32 PM
Meow said…
Very Realistic and sweetly innocent too :P
April 8, 2010 at 10:26 PM
buckingfastard said…
aww sweet!! i luv happy ending..!! i was actually scared that u wud end the story tragically!!!

liked it
April 8, 2010 at 10:48 PM
Ganesh_Dalal said…
wow U!!! am I missing something???
rare pure feelings can only be express in simple words... done here beautifully...
April 9, 2010 at 10:18 AM
Urvashi said…
@Shas : Thank you.. :) keep visiting..

@Rajat: hehe.. nervousness... seems like u hv been through it.. ;)

@Mingled Minds : Thanks 4 dropping by...

@Simply : Thanks..!! TC :)

@Gautam : Thanks... Glad tht u liked it..

@Niraj : thanks.. M all smiles.. :)

@Rahil : Relate to most...........hmmmmmm ;)

Thanks..

n yeah u r one of the few ppl who liked this theme...thanks.. :)
April 9, 2010 at 10:38 PM
Urvashi said…
@Harini: u know actually the pic is gif..the couple dances around..but pata nahi wat happened to it on the blog.. :( its static..

thanks dear.. :)

@AdreamyGal: Yeahh yeah..socha kuch diffeent kare.. :) :) yeah it was first time.... thanks a lot... :)

@An ordianry Gal: Riya, it is a FICTION... thank u :) :)

@Nipun : hmm...wanted to keep it simple n short..thank you :)

@Rohini : thanks 4 ur comments... cyaa around.. :)

@Meow: Hmm.... thank u... seen u after a long tym.. TC :)

@BF : Hmm..yeahh..it has a happy ending... glad tht u like it..!!

@Ganesh : Missing...??? hmmm...wat..?? ;)

Thanks a lot....!!
April 9, 2010 at 10:38 PM
Ganesh_Dalal said…
is thr any reason behind this romantic mood???
April 10, 2010 at 11:07 AM
Neerz said…
Its pretty...keep writing...
April 10, 2010 at 1:12 PM
Neha said…
hey cool yaar! really loved it!
sweet

:)
April 10, 2010 at 10:50 PM
Neha said…
Hey Urvashi, this was a very good write up..emotions well expressed..great flow of words :)

you reminded me of my old post that I had written about the first times..

http://nehasilam.blogspot.com/2009/06/1st-time.html

coincidentally; it was the first ever post where I had got a lot of comments since I had started blogging..
April 11, 2010 at 1:46 PM
binal said…
hey its so sweet....loved it!!!
experienced it ???????????
April 11, 2010 at 7:31 PM
deepa kashyap said…
1st time here...
nice flow of feelings n d frm of words..
nice post :)
April 12, 2010 at 1:26 AM
Urvashi said…
@Ganesh: Hmmm reason.. nothing as such.... Jus 4 a chng.... ;)

@Neer : Thank u.. :)

@Neha: Thanks re... : njoyin ur vacs.. ?? TC :)

@Arpit: Thnk u so much.. :)

@Neha Silam : Thanks.. I chkd out post too..itsalso a lovely piece...a different take but wonderful one.. :)

@Binal : Ohh wow....kya baat hai..U also liked romantic post.. !! Hmmmmm.... Thnks...

naa re....wud tell u if I actually expereince it.. ;)

@Deepa: Thanks dear...Keep visiting...!! :) :)
April 12, 2010 at 6:43 PM
deeps said…
loved going thru it...

well...
this one truely is spl... such moments make us what we never have been....
April 15, 2010 at 7:08 PM
dam said…
hey nice1 raeally cool!!!!!
hmm......kuch to baat hai!!!!!1
April 17, 2010 at 11:36 AM
Arshat Chaudhary said…
Very well written yaar.. especially if its the first time :)
April 18, 2010 at 10:51 PM
Urvashi said…
@Deeps: rightly said...they jus take u in a wonderland...

@Dam : tu bhi...kya yaar...kuch bhi nahi hai...:) :)

@Arshat : Thanks a lot...... :)
April 18, 2010 at 11:02 PM
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