ThE sUrPriSe..!! - 55 Fiction



“Its so strange.. I mean after being away for nearly a month, without any trace.. And then suddenly….”


“Yeah strange… But more of a surprise naa..??” Shikha enquired.


“Surprise..?? I can’t manage it. I thought it was over & I was finally out of it.


But








I will have to still carry my Umbrella….” :P





P.S. : Wow Folks, feels so good to be back at My Corner after so long.. I hope the 55-er was not that bad... But the rains outside made me feel like writing something....& what have you all been upto..??? I think everyone is kind of away from blogosphere.. Or is it a feeling just because I am away from here.. Well about me, apart from enjoying the unexpected rains in Mumbai, I am planning to get back to studies, books, exams &.......

Comments

binal said…
again it was awesome......i always like ur 55 words fiction...
October 16, 2011 at 7:59 PM
The Solitary Writer said…
it was really good...haha :D

take care ...m back to blogging too
October 29, 2011 at 10:15 AM
Vinay Gudi said…
Nice 1...
I mean nice 55..!!
Now...Waiting for ur Nov blogposts!!
November 1, 2011 at 9:52 PM
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