The Call




For the seventh time, he dint answer her call because he was angry at her for not calling him throughout the day.


The next morning he got a call from the police saying that the girl had an accident last night while driving using cell and his number was first on the recent call list..!!


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P.S. : This is my first attempt at writing 55 fiction, a form of fiction to be completed within a limit of 55 words.Its really challenging to complete the story in just 55 words. I found it interesting and so decided to give it a try..!! Do let me know how it was and if there are any suggestions for further improvement.!!!


My inspiration for this was my blog mate Shruti..!! Cheers to you yaar, you write fabulous stories in just 55 words..!!!


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Shruti said...

Hey girlie :)
This 55Fiction was damn cool :)
Loved it!

U got inspired by me? Wow :)

Anoop said...

Hey Urvashi
tats cool... :)

Ganesh_Dalal said...

WOW.. really interesting..

Anoop said...

hey urvashi
let me give u a suggestion?
give a title or label or pic or somethin which shows tat ur post is a 55 fiction... so tat readers can easily identify...

thr r many ppl who r jus lookin for 55Fs... ;)

The Illuminator said...

Wow now that's new. So do you continue the story in 55 words other every time?

Darshan Chande said...

I loved the concept of 55-fiction. And this story is just great! As for suggestion, I would agree with Anoop's.

Sid 'Ravan' Kabe said...

ossum...thats nice 55...welcome 2 d world of f-55...:D

Riya Rocks said...

nice fiction...keep writing :)

Arnav said...

nice fiction.. Sends a strong message in those 55 words...
:)


Keep writing and smiling :)

Dr. Chandana Shekar said...

good job. try writin more...

binal said...

hey nice fiction loved it........!!!!!

freelancer said...

oh this is nice. more of a sweet and cute write

buckingfastard said...

gr8 by general standards...and as ur writing it fr 1st time...OMG gr8...

it was so complete!! nice!!

ηανєєη said...

gud one ... this kind of irony is hard to deal with

Harini said...

Hi Urvashi

I really liked it... Good one:)

HaRy!! said...

now thats how yu bring awareness!! nice one !!!

adreamygal said...

Hi Urvashi , just dropped in here and found a very cute and cool blog ..Liked all your thoughts :)Keep them flowing ..:)

Urvashi said...

@All: thanks 4 the comments..!! Will surely try some more of these fictions in the future..!!

@Anoop, Darshan: I have added a label for 55 fiction as u had suggested..!! Thank u..!! :)

Ankita said...

loved all of them..esp ur frst one was very touching!