The Act...!!!!



“You are my happiness… You bring joy to my life... Even thinking about you brings smile on my face…. I love you, would you marry me..??”


Saying this, he went down on his knees before Sheetal , held her hand and brought out a ring from his pocket.


“Perfect…!! ” snapped Sheetal. "I want the same expressions tomorrow on stage. It’s good to have an actor like you. No one can perform this as naturally as you can…”


“Hmm….”


“Be on time then. Bye.. ” she said hurriedly and left.


Left before Aman could say that he was not acting.



Comments

Anoop said…
sad.... :(
kick tat girl... :((
November 22, 2009 at 6:08 PM
Anonymous said…
dats so sad :( poor guy ...
November 23, 2009 at 10:40 AM
Arjun said…
wah..!! Nice one ... :)

Cheers..!!
Arjun
November 23, 2009 at 11:00 AM
Pankhuri said…
*Happens*.......
*Sigh*
November 23, 2009 at 12:32 PM
Rahil said…
thank god some one is there who understands that boys also do have feelings and get heart broken..other i read blog posts where it is other way around :(
November 23, 2009 at 6:15 PM
buckingfastard said…
as dey say.... sad but true!!
November 23, 2009 at 6:16 PM
Darshan Chande said…
Beautiful :) Is it as a part of 55-fiction that you have started...? I like this "very short" stories concept...
November 23, 2009 at 6:35 PM
Urvashi said…
@Anoop: Yeah...sad...The girl cudnt really understand him..!! :(

@Ravan : Thank u..! :)

@dreamygal: hmm....

@ Arjun : Thanks..!!

@ An Ordianry Gal : Thank u..!!

@Pankhuri: Hmm...Poor guy..wasnt able to put across his feelings..

@Rahil: Ohh...sad :(
I definitely beleieve k boys have heart but just that sometimes they are not able to express their emotions the right way..!!

Thanks :)

@buckingfastard: Hmmm....sad.... 4 a chng 4m the happy ending tales..!!

@Darshan: Thanks :)

Even I liked this concept.. Wanted to fit it in 55 words but was not able to...so jus categorised it as 'Fiction'..!!
November 23, 2009 at 11:07 PM
oRange* said…
awh, sad! sweet one ya!
and i love ur blog too :)
November 23, 2009 at 11:26 PM
Ganesh_Dalal said…
poor guy, is Sheetal still uncommitted???
November 24, 2009 at 1:07 AM
binal said…
ohh very sad.......!!!
November 24, 2009 at 3:11 PM
binal said…
This comment has been removed by the author.
November 24, 2009 at 3:11 PM
Karthik Kotresh said…
Nice one. Didn't expect that. :)
November 25, 2009 at 2:52 PM
Meow said…
Really very interesting :)
November 25, 2009 at 11:37 PM
Urvashi said…
@Orange : Thank U :)

@Ganesh : Hmm.. Sheetal k baare me..puchna padega..!! ;)

@Binal : Yeahh.......!!!

@Karthik : hmm..Thanks :)

@ Meow: Thanks dear :)
November 26, 2009 at 12:17 AM
Ankita said…
hii

wow! thats nice :)
November 27, 2009 at 12:03 AM
Ekam said…
Awww.. This was sad but still it was beautiful :)
November 30, 2009 at 5:18 PM
jiths said…
boys are always good at heart and sincere....
wel the proposal was the same usual one... y ppl arent creativ at least when they r proposing?!!
December 16, 2009 at 8:12 AM
Puneet Thakkar said…
aajkal gals do not try to understand but its not their fault as they do not have brains to choose a correct guy
May 25, 2010 at 12:54 PM
Unknown said…
Really amazing..
Sad but true..:)
Congos for getting it published..:)

Cheers

Nuts
May 28, 2010 at 9:21 PM
Anonymous said…
Amazing Story!!! *senti*


Keep the good work up!!! :))
May 29, 2010 at 5:15 PM
Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

3 Idiots, Damini's Take (Part - 2)

Image
Part - 1 Our school practised the policy of "Divide and Rule" ... Yes, they shuffled our divisions for our secondary classes but we were of course the students of the same school and we followed our own policy of "United we stand "... This in turn , led to "Divide and Unite..." Sounds strange naaa ?? but that is what happened with me. I became Binal's friend. Though I knew her and Urvashi earlier, we did not speak much. Now, as things turned out to be, I also became their friend and we met everyday during our breaks discussing tales of both the class rooms. Everyone had new friends and their old set of friends too.. So, in a sense, our groups started growing with us..... Then we all joined up the same classes for our SSC and that was one of the best times of my life, spent with my friends. Ours became a group of 5 eventually who always sat together, studied together and partied together... Yes those were the initial years when we started to celeb...
Read more

Celebrations

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 16 ; the sixteenth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton . "Yeah pink colour suits you. Buy that saree..." Mom finalised for me. "I had liked that one only from the beginning. ?I'll buy that one only..." & I turned to the shopkeeper. "Bhaiya yeh pack kar dena...." "Haan madam, this colour is perfect for you. Diwali ke din aap khub chamkengi..!!" "Arey, it's not for Diwali.. It is for my reception after Diwali..." "Ohhh... Shopping for marriage.... So Madam, buy more... This would be your last Diwali at home..??!!!" the shopkeeper questioned. I nodded but the enthusiasm of shopping vanished. Every time I try to come out of that mood , something or other pops up to remind me of my last days...... I begin to feel low on hearing the word "Last...
Read more

For the first time...

Image
That night, she was very very tired but when she lied down on bed, she just could not sleep.. All the scenes from the day flashed by her eyes... One day.. And so many things in her life had changed... She recollected a dialogue fro ma movie "Life mein bahut saari cheezein pehli baar hoti hai..." For the first time... She had lied at home while going out... For the first time... She got the biggest surprise when she knew that he had got a new bike... For the first time... She sat on the bike with fear but was confident that he would take care of her.. For the first time... She roamed around places, where though she had been earlier, seemed entirely different and new that day... For the first time... She felt like talking and talking as someone was listening to her with a smile.. For the first time... She walked barefoot on the rocks as the water kissed her feet... For the first time... When she was about to lose her balance, someone was there to hold her hand... For the first ...
Read more